Hi my name is Kane i love food min is. samglss they ar yam and they ar hafe . i Foom christchurch
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Tuesday 18 September 2018
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wow kane i like all the strong words you have riten.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Kane, im Maddison a year six in Rimu. This is an amazing blog for your first time and I bet that your teachers are very proud. You have used such strong words and I do think that this blog could be a little better but then again there is always an improvement. a quick tip to make this better maybe you could write a bit more and make your I's capitals. I think to make things a little better you could probal change the background to make it eye catching.
ReplyDeleteKind Regards Maddison from Rimu.