My class is writing a letter to somewhere we went in the holidays.
Hoyts Westfield
Rotherham St,
Riccarton, Christchurch 8041
16 October 2018
Dear Hoyts,
I enjoyed going to your cinema during the holiday. I am glad that I chose to watch my favorite movie at your cinema. I was sitting at the front with my cousin. The movie’s name was ‘Small Foot’. The seat was very comfortable and I had a good spot in the middle, The snacks were excellent and me and my cousin ran to look for his brother's dad. You have a good service at the movies because at the counter you helped my cousin to swipe the card when he was buying the coke.
Please, can you to have a small break in the middle of the movie because it was such a long time to sit and watch. I just need to stretch my legs and go to the loo! I would like it if you can make the chairs lean back.
From Kane Upston
hi my name is phoenix and you have done lots of work next time get more detail posted by phoenix
ReplyDeleteHi Kane, its Ian from Rimu.
ReplyDeleteYou did a great blog post.
I love how you wrote your letter.
I loved your sense of humor also. this reminds me when I write camp letters to people. Did you enjoy writing this? maybe next time you could re read your punctuation. Other than that you did awesome.
I hope to see more of your work soon.
Kind regards Ian.
Hi Kane, THis is Sam From Yaldhurst Model School,
ReplyDeleteIt's good to hear that you had
a good time watching small foot,
and you did a great job remembering
to put the word " Dear " at the start.
Other than that, excellent blog post!
Sam
i love alll this informaion Kane. next time use 2 more full stops in your story/letter. were did you get all this informaion from?
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